Would you please critique my poem….or rate it?

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    Clear of the argent green leaves,
    A figure appears.
    Majestically guiding its way,
    Through where air is unconfined.
    Beckoning a soul comrade,
    From beyond where all can see.
    Disregarded on purpose,
    His broken heart apparent.
    Lowly he is perched,
    Just out of harms way.
    Solemnly he lowers his head,
    A glistening tear falls to the ground.
    Alas,
    “You reap what you sow.”
    “Karma.”
    It is eventually felt by all.
    Even, the Elk.

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